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Chapter One Teaser: THE RECKONING

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In honor of my release date tomorrow (Saturday, February 1st 2020), I have decided to share the first few pages of chapter one from The Pavers. This is not all of chapter one, just a little snippet!


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CHAPTER ONE: THE RECKONING


“Heart rate’s dropping!” a nurse shouted as she helped lift a woman onto

a steel operating table. Angels are among us was tattooed at the base of the

nurse’s neck in beautiful flourished lettering. God, I hope so, I thought. Looks

like she needs some angels right about now. I stepped closer and peered over

the nurse’s shoulder at the woman, her strawberry-blonde hair tangled and

matted to her pale, ivory skin. Her face was badly bruised with dark swollen

welts lining the left side of her face. From the looks of it, she was pretty, in

her early twenties, but I couldn’t tell from all the damage.


Her body was limp as they cut away her blood-soaked shirt. Her lower

body was completely naked as they threw a blue medical towel over her.

Blood seeped out of an angry-looking gash on the side of her stomach while

a nurse placed an oxygen mask on the lifeless patient. Almost as soon as it

was fastened, a defeated, ominous tone rang out in the corner. The heart

rate monitor was flatlining. My breath caught in my throat as I stared at the

poor woman, wondering if her family knew she was dying. I wondered if

she had dreams that she hadn’t accomplished yet, or if she’d told the people

she loved the most how she felt about them. Did she even have anyone that

would miss her?


“Fight hard! We’re gonna need you to push through this!” the nurse

with the tattoo demanded at her lifeless patient. The monitor continued to

sound its alarm in resounding protest, ignoring the nurse’s pleas as I looked

on helplessly.


“Doesn’t look good, does it?” a calm voice chimed in next to me.

Startled, I turned to find a charming young man smiling indignantly back

at me with gentle, pale blue eyes. A black vintage hat with a peacock feather

at the rim framed his kind face, which seemed completely oblivious to

the tragedy unfolding before us. He was a little overly dressed to be in an

operating room, his dark navy blue suit tailored perfectly to fit his slender

build. All I could manage to do was stare. Where did he come from? He

seemed so out of place, yet no one seemed bothered he was there. No one

seemed bothered I was there either, for that matter. All their attention was

dedicated to the life they were losing, the woman who seemed too young to

die. There was too much blood—I couldn’t make out her broken form as the

medical team surrounded her. I had a sinking suspicion that her life would

be lost tonight. There was no way she could be saved now.


“Yeah, I don’t think she’s going to make it.” I looked back over at the mad

rush of surgical scrubs dashing around the room, trying to resuscitate her.

I wondered who would have let the strange man in during all the chaos.

Everyone was focused, doing everything they were trained to do. There

wasn’t a moment to spare to open the door. Did he just let himself in? I

could feel his eyes still trained on me as the monitor continued to ring out.

I found it so strange that he wasn’t doing anything to help. He didn’t even

give the woman a second glance. I wasn’t sure if I wanted to ask him what

he wanted or to tell him to leave.


I finally settled with “Are you a doctor?” as I smiled politely up at him.

I didn’t have it in me to be rude—it wasn’t my nature—but sometimes I

wished I could be more forward. I was the kind of girl who said “sorry” after

I bumped into a pole at a grocery store.


The man’s blue eyes danced under his tilted hat, as if he were laughing

at my presumption. A bright energy seemed to glow around him, but there

was no true source. Even his brown oxford shoes glistened from a fresh

polish under the hospital fluorescents.


“My sincerest apologies, Georgia. My name is Jerry Carter, and might I

say it is a pleasure to finally make your acquaintance.” He eagerly extended

a hand as he inspected me from head to toe and nodded as if he approved. I

squinted back up at him. How did he know my name?


I cautiously reached out to grab his hand and was shocked by his warmth

as his long fingers curled around mine. His smile deepened, and gorgeous

laugh lines crinkled at both of his temples.


“And no, I’m not a doctor. I’m here on official business... I’m here for you.”

His lips quirked upward .


Me? But why?


“Now, I don’t mean to alarm you, but there’s two gentlemen that are here

to meet you. They’re in the lobby down the hall, and I’m afraid it’s rather

urgent.” His kind face grew serious as his eyes wandered over toward the

dying woman. I awkwardly dropped my hand from his grip.


“What’s it about?” I asked with a suspicious glare as I watched him check

his golden Gucci watch.


He nodded toward the poor soul bleeding out on the table. “It’s a matter

of life and death. Now if you wouldn’t mind following me?” He stepped

toward the door leading out to the hallway, beckoning me forward. “We

don’t have much time.”


I watched his tall frame disappear as he left the room. My gaze returned

to the woman on the table as a nurse brought over the defibrillator while

another performed CPR. What could be that urgent? I didn’t know how I

felt reconvening with a strange man and his mysterious visitors, but maybe

I should at least leave the room. I didn’t feel I should be there anymore. No

one needed me, and I wasn’t doing the girl any good by just standing there.

I headed toward the door and peeked down the dimly lit hallway. The

corridor was empty but was somehow filled with a buzzing energy I couldn’t

quite pin down. One would think that hospitals would have more people

walking around. Where is everyone? I looked down toward the end of the

vacant hallway, the strange man nowhere to be seen.


I turned back as the monitor’s alarm continued to resonate, echoing

down the vast, empty hallway. A wave of nausea coursed through me, my

heart sinking even deeper for the mysterious patient. I felt a deep pull away

from her, and a more distinct push toward Jerry. A beckoning, a calling. I

finally gave in, shooting one last glance at the heartbreaking scene before I

continued out the door.



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